07/19/00 -- The Aborted Covert Mission
So we had this plan, see?
Critiques this morning. Things seem to be
really mellowing out. I turned in "Sisters and Sirens"
this morning and that was the only story that got turned in. It's
weird to see our productivity from the first four weeks drop to nearly
nothing these last two weeks.
Lunch happened in the cafeteria. Grilled
cheese and fruit. Bleah.
I wound up taking Linda and Jennifer to the MSU
student union where they have a post office. We were going to take
two cars (they've got tons to mail back home), but I said, No.
It'll all fit in my CRV. I swear. And if it doesn't, well,
we'll shove stuff in the back seat and drive up to Linda's car.
But it all fit. The post office isn't terribly convenient if you've
got fifteen boxes of stuff to carry in there to mail, but we got it all
taken care of.
When we got back, Trey and Mark and Jennifer and
I started attempt #2 at our covert mission. We went to the library
and made our way through to the elevator and down to Special
Collections. There, we asked for the 1975 Clarion box. Greg
Frost's stuff was in there. Our mission: pick a story, get them to
copy it for us, and take it back so we could put it in the critique box
tomorrow morning. Jennifer and I had an attack of conscience while
we read two of the five stories to determine which would be the target for
critique (the 6500 word story was right out -- too long). We couldn't
do it. Mark and Trey egged us on, but we prevailed. Mission
aborted. We returned to Owen empty handed and hoped, as we ran
across Kelly and Derek walking back the way we'd come, that someone else
hadn't decided on a similar mission.
Then Jennifer and I went off to Van Hoosen (or,
rather the courtyard) to read and critique and, well, whatever.
Jennifer wound up going back to her room to take a nap while I sat there
and tried to come up with a decent plot for a novel. I made
notes/asked questions about the main character. I have a lot to get
organized in my head before I do something with this. It's
frustrating. Really frustrating. Maybe I'll pull What If?
down later and look at some of their plot exercises. I dunno.
Wound up grabbing dinner with Greg and Maureen in
the cafeteria. We talked about a handful of things (including
strange euphemisms such as "talking Godzilla for a walk" -- no,
not the 'Flying Godzilla' from IHOP) and laughed and stuff. Maureen
and Greg disappeared for a one-on-one and Jennifer appeared. We
talked, wound up going back to the Van Hoosen courtyard and
talking/reading/critiquing s'more. I thought about Gabriel s'more
and about my plot-that-isn't-yet.
When the one-on-one was over, Greg and Jennifer
disappeared to talk about revision and Maureen and I wound up walking down
Grand River. We walked to Tower Records, poked through there, and
walked back, talking about a whole bunch of stuff the whole way. It
was a really nice walk and I played with a snap dragon while we walked and
talked. Our conversation continued back at her apartment and I
played her an MP3 of Nine Inch Nails vs the Spice Girls. Suffice it
to say that it is scary. Very scary. We laughed a lot.
:) And then I inflicted it on Greg (who came over to tell us we were
having way too much fun). More conversation ensued (including some
delightfully funny and frightening Gardner stories).
Maureen kicked Greg and I out and we wound up
talking outside, then Trey walked by and we all ducked into Greg's
apartment for beer and more conversation.
Yep, it was a night of conversation. It's
strange that I don't feel too terribly sleepy (even after a beer).
I'm a little spun up even though Clarion is almost over. It just
feels weird. Today's Wednesday. We have tomorrow (and the
reading at Archives), then Friday (with the bar-b-queue and t-shirts and
cake and stuff) and then it's over. All over. I'm going to
pack my room up on Saturday. First thing Sunday, Paula and I will
drive off.
I can't believe it is almost over.
Almost.
But not yet.
I'm going to try to hold onto it as long as I
can. Probably will even when I get home.
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Okay, so other
folks are talking about their productivity here. I decided I
may as well, too.
This list (and my productivity) is subject to change without
notice. :)
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Title
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Word Count
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Finished
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Critiqued?
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"Where
the Blood Roses Grow"
Week one, first story. Wahoo. And I was worried that
something wouldn't come. |
5000 |
6/13 |
6/15 |
"Uprooting
the Tree"
Will probably change the title at some point. |
3400 |
6/16 |
6/19 |
"Mockingbird
Girl"
I think I'm happiest with this story, so far. |
2800 |
6/19 |
6/26 |
"Poor
as Paupers, Rich as Royalty"
My challenge story from Sean's week. I hated writing
it. It gave me a toothache. |
2000
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6/22
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| That
fucking first person narrative (not yet complete) - May never be
completed. Don't I feel like an idiot... |
(400) |
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"Switched
to Overload" (That
other fucking first person narrative)
Actually, I like this one better than the one above it ...
Even if it did wind up being two first person narratives in one
story. o.O |
4900 |
6/27 |
7/3 |
| "Sweeter
Than Honey, Stronger Than Wine" (My
Tananrive Due challenge story. Write a story in the style of
an author whose work you admire. Aieee! It was sort of
supposed to be in the style of Tanith Lee. I'm not sure I
hit that. But it's definitely got a Christina Rossetti
influence.) |
9200 |
7/2 |
7/10 |
"Hypothetical
Beaches"
I really hope it turns out to be not quite as stupid as I feel
like it is. Finished it just before Maureen and Greg's
24-hour moratorium on writing. (In case you're wondering, it
started from a free-write.) |
2800 |
7/10 |
7/13 |
"From
Time to Time" (unfinished)
Fucked if I know what this is going to turn into if it will turn
into anything over the next couple of days. It's
twisted. Or at least a little gross. |
(837) |
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"Sisters
and Sirens"
It's first person.
Ugh. You'd think I'd've learned after "Switched to
Overload". Feh. I think I like it, but I'm
not sure. Everything I thought was in there isn't, but I
don't know how I can put it in there ... or if I really want
to. The stuff that isn't in there is in my head and makes me
cry. |
3800 |
7/18 |
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